Line Collage
Simple pencil drawings.8 total reviews
Comment from vipshehan-Nikon
This is a nice sketch and it is almost like a puzzle at the beginning. The detail is good and it has good story telling ability too.
Thanks for sharing and I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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This is a nice sketch and it is almost like a puzzle at the beginning. The detail is good and it has good story telling ability too.
Thanks for sharing and I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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vipshehan-Nikon,
you are welcome, pleased you enjoyed the collage. thank you for the time and the comments, all are appreciated.
Comment from benkolo
Composed very well. A very good technique and ability have been shown. A lovely centre of interest and a nice initial impact.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Composed very well. A very good technique and ability have been shown. A lovely centre of interest and a nice initial impact.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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benkolo,
thank you and your time and comments are always appreciated.
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You're very welcome
Comment from Conception's Dawn
It is unique to see the random thoughts of an artist as they put on paper what they view before them. Your sketches are very organized almost in comic book fasion. The lines are clean and precise showing great detail while remaining simply. This is a wonderful composition.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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It is unique to see the random thoughts of an artist as they put on paper what they view before them. Your sketches are very organized almost in comic book fasion. The lines are clean and precise showing great detail while remaining simply. This is a wonderful composition.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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conception's dawn,
thank you for your time in looking and then commenting on the drawing, all are appreciated
Comment from britjill
First of all, good luck in the contest. This is a very neat way to spend time, especially at an airport. So much better than reading a book. Your efforts are great, especially working with the lines. Good job. Jill
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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First of all, good luck in the contest. This is a very neat way to spend time, especially at an airport. So much better than reading a book. Your efforts are great, especially working with the lines. Good job. Jill
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Jill,
thank you for you best wishes in the contest, and also for your time in looking and the commenting, all are appreciated.
Comment from joyfulartist
I believe in these sketches you caught what was you saw. I can see different things going on such as a woman sitting. Jeans two that are worn by men and not sure about the bottom right picture.
So you did a good job sketching as you were waiting.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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I believe in these sketches you caught what was you saw. I can see different things going on such as a woman sitting. Jeans two that are worn by men and not sure about the bottom right picture.
So you did a good job sketching as you were waiting.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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joyfulartist,
I was sitting and standing and seeing the folds in blue jeans, with people siting and standing, and then the upper right, how lines flow to create movement and flow. thank you for your time and then the comments, all are appreciated.
Comment from jesuel
what a great contour line drawing the line work is really good i like how you have several frames really good studies fine work here
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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what a great contour line drawing the line work is really good i like how you have several frames really good studies fine work here
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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jesuel,
Thank you for your time and the comments. have great day.
Comment from sweetbaby
Very nice done sketch good color lighting good and center good too great story too eye catching in pack so good
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Very nice done sketch good color lighting good and center good too great story too eye catching in pack so good
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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sweetbaby,
so what do you not like, what can be improved? thank you for the time and the comments appreciated
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nothing it great
Comment from raineyknightartwork
Initial Perception: detailed
Emotionally charged: yes and exciting flying
Story Telling Ability: Yes
Colour Harmony: balanced
Title: works
Artist Notes: sharing
Technical Creativity: above average, the pants work well but the upper right hand corner picture detracts from the rest
Center of Interest: shading
Category Posted: Correct
Story Telling Ability: Yes
What Works Well? Depth of field, subject
Comments: pleasure to review
Star Rating: 4.5
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Per site scale (6=Exceptional, 5.5=Professional, 5=Expert (no revisions necessary) 4.5=Above Average, 4=Average)
Thank you for sharing. Rainey
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Initial Perception: detailed
Emotionally charged: yes and exciting flying
Story Telling Ability: Yes
Colour Harmony: balanced
Title: works
Artist Notes: sharing
Technical Creativity: above average, the pants work well but the upper right hand corner picture detracts from the rest
Center of Interest: shading
Category Posted: Correct
Story Telling Ability: Yes
What Works Well? Depth of field, subject
Comments: pleasure to review
Star Rating: 4.5
A cyber rating may be given when actual stars are unavailable
Per site scale (6=Exceptional, 5.5=Professional, 5=Expert (no revisions necessary) 4.5=Above Average, 4=Average)
Thank you for sharing. Rainey
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Rainey,
so that area is not, does not show good line variations?
thank you for the time and the comments, much appreciated.
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You are welcome. I am happy you appreciate my efforts. Rainey