my angel wept
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Comment from BrooklynMyra
Excellent work. It is very hard to win a contest since the judging can go any way. I love how you did the figure and the wings. I wonder how it would have looked with a more somber background.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Excellent work. It is very hard to win a contest since the judging can go any way. I love how you did the figure and the wings. I wonder how it would have looked with a more somber background.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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oh she could have any background,..i think i went for the easiest in this one..wink. thanks for the great review
Comment from WendyG
Oh she is beautiful MK, this work of art hold great emotion, an excellent work of art. SHARPIE! YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOUR MISSING!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Oh she is beautiful MK, this work of art hold great emotion, an excellent work of art. SHARPIE! YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOUR MISSING!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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lol. thanks for the great review
Comment from david F
Brilliant bro, just brilliant
Her body is amazing so realistic , an amazing piece of art The shading too is incredible , So good to be able to see her again
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Brilliant bro, just brilliant
Her body is amazing so realistic , an amazing piece of art The shading too is incredible , So good to be able to see her again
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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thanks bro for the great review
Comment from julika
Congratulations on the MTV thingy...great image this is...is she a " fallen angel " and that's why the tear? Lovely figure of this angel..you're competing with Jesuel here..love the wings..would love to see her fly..great image..creative as ever.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Congratulations on the MTV thingy...great image this is...is she a " fallen angel " and that's why the tear? Lovely figure of this angel..you're competing with Jesuel here..love the wings..would love to see her fly..great image..creative as ever.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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never compete with jesuel.unlike him though i do draw everything and i have done many a women like he has..but look at the portfolio..i have many but i dont like to bore my audience ..wink. thanks for the great review
Comment from photoman12
Congradulations. Did you submit this for the awards. Did you know it was going to be shown? i will look to see if I can see the awards show.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Congradulations. Did you submit this for the awards. Did you know it was going to be shown? i will look to see if I can see the awards show.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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yep submitted it thru sharpie website when the contest came up,..was tickled when i received the email they selecting some of my work..i was working that night but recorded it and was proud of my few seconds of fame..we had a movie producer from HBO here in memphis doing a film and so happens i was his cab driver that night.. he talked a lotta noise but he did manage to BS me out of this drawing..he has it now and i aint got squat..bummer..lol. thanks for the great review
Comment from Lucien van Oosten
Mike I like the idea, the thing that I think is good is the way you created the body coloration, not easy to get that tonal quality and highlights using the minimal color available with the sharpies.
I am also thinking the wing structure is good, and you needs all of the wing in the frame. Like making the composition more rectangular would have accomplished that, it would have made the image more dramatic.
The red tear's, do not work for me, they clash too much with the really good skin tones are get lost as tears.
I am also thinking the wings need a few darker lines in them, to give them more structure, like partially seeing the quails the rib structure on some of the feathers.
One other thing her hair color needs to be more angelic, like golden yellows, she looks too matronly, like too old. Her body looks youthful and her hair look too old I see no youth or vibrancy there.
I still like the idea of an angle that is distress over what is happening, sad, etc. But I still want to see her as more youthful.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Mike I like the idea, the thing that I think is good is the way you created the body coloration, not easy to get that tonal quality and highlights using the minimal color available with the sharpies.
I am also thinking the wing structure is good, and you needs all of the wing in the frame. Like making the composition more rectangular would have accomplished that, it would have made the image more dramatic.
The red tear's, do not work for me, they clash too much with the really good skin tones are get lost as tears.
I am also thinking the wings need a few darker lines in them, to give them more structure, like partially seeing the quails the rib structure on some of the feathers.
One other thing her hair color needs to be more angelic, like golden yellows, she looks too matronly, like too old. Her body looks youthful and her hair look too old I see no youth or vibrancy there.
I still like the idea of an angle that is distress over what is happening, sad, etc. But I still want to see her as more youthful.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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i was breaking away from the traditional blonde hair thing..who says that they all have that color. noted for the rest and thanks for u taking the time reviewing this penmaster..thanks!
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U are correct; they all do not have to have that hair color & the color there a minor thing, the other stuff I wrote is more significant for me on improving the compositional flow.
For me, in this with the mood, the sadness it would have made for a good contrasting color and a mood difference brightness against somber.
Take care and have a great day, no matter how I think some of your pieces could be corrected sometimes, you do amazing work with the media. I know the medias difficulties and truly like your work. Your sense of humor and in this somberness come across well.
Take care ... Cheers!!!
Lucien
Comment from marlak25
I know a star! Very cool illustration! Great detail, technique, color and your wonderful imagination. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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I know a star! Very cool illustration! Great detail, technique, color and your wonderful imagination. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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lol..thanks for the great review
Comment from Reganato
visually stunning piece...nice rendition of a guardian angel perched on a rock...nice details and emotion captured in the image...well balanced and proportioned in the frame...well done and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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visually stunning piece...nice rendition of a guardian angel perched on a rock...nice details and emotion captured in the image...well balanced and proportioned in the frame...well done and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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thanks for the great review
Comment from shoregrass
Another one of your beautiful creations. Besides being wonderfully rendered with great detail, it conveys powerful emotion. I am really enthralled by the symmetry and balance of form that comes together between the rock pedestal, the angel's body and its position, and the wings. Quite a lovely flow to whole piece. Excellent.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Another one of your beautiful creations. Besides being wonderfully rendered with great detail, it conveys powerful emotion. I am really enthralled by the symmetry and balance of form that comes together between the rock pedestal, the angel's body and its position, and the wings. Quite a lovely flow to whole piece. Excellent.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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thanks for the great review
Comment from randrphotos
No wonder she is crying, those stones must be hard on her bare bum. You could of at least given her a cussion. A really nice picture Mark with great detail and expression. Well done and thanks for sharing. Yall be good now.
Regards,
Robin,
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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No wonder she is crying, those stones must be hard on her bare bum. You could of at least given her a cussion. A really nice picture Mark with great detail and expression. Well done and thanks for sharing. Yall be good now.
Regards,
Robin,
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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thanks for the great review
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You are very welcome again Mark my friend.
Regards,
Robin.