Comment from
Terjondy
You have chosen an interesting POV for this work. The flat, solid colours give it a cartoon feel. I think the composition can benefit from a crop on the right side so that the main subject in not right in the middle of the canvas.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
Thank you for your kind review of my art and also for your helpful suggestion.
VMarguarite
Comment from
cynnocence
I love this my friend. I immediately made me remember how anxious I was to go to school after the long summer. It seems like he has his new "back to school" shirt and backpack and I am smiling. The colours are exceptional the POV is great, almost like looking down from the security camera and I love the lunchbox, but since it is white it is sort of whited out by the floor. Cyn
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
Thank you very much for taking the time to critique my artwork, and I am pleased that looking at my art brought back fond memories for you. I also appreciate your 5-Star rating.
VMarguarite