Comment from photoman12
This looks like something Picasso would draw. Very strange looking. So this has to do with women being more than sugar and spice.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012

--and women are normal people- HUMANS- we are not the evil subscribed us by the bible nor all sugar and spice, but some sisters are very weak, using men as tools, using a whole range of not very nice feminine attributes to get their own way and make it difficult for their sisters, to be whole people!

Comment from Lucien van Oosten
Simple lines, maybe too simple and still a good sketch. I do think it would be make a better finished drawing is there was more line variation. I also think it needs a little more room at the top, it is cropped, drawn very tightly there at the top of her head, like the exaggerated feet, nice start.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012

one minute sketch-- I do not do photographic images, I view the figure as scenario, as I cannot draw all in my view, the figure parts come as they fit into what I sketch in the same way. thank you

reply by Lucien van Oosten on 29-Oct-2012

I should have used the word frame to tightly. A big part of learning to draw, create art, is proper use of the space. also line variation will help with creating a better form, and eventually leads into proper use of the lighting and giving the subject a better form. It's all part of the learning process & getting better and more adept with the use materials and subject. have a great day
Cheers!!
Lucien