Comment from ozzyart
This is such a challenging subject you decided to do! The composition is good, but your perspective is not quite right because the close hand on the left is smaller than the more distant hand on the right. You can easily fix it without disturbing your artwork, by simply flipping your image horizontally, so it is in reverse, making your perspective more correct.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013

Thank you for your welcomed and helpful comments about my artwork.

VMarguarite

reply by ozzyart on 28-Jun-2013

You're very welcome, glad I could help you!
Cheers,
Irene

Comment from MKFlood
pretty cool. the choice of color nis good. thedetail is good. the depth is good. very creative and good job overall

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013

Thank you kindly for taking the time to critique my art, and I am also appreciative of your 5-Star rating.

VMarguarite

Comment from MinoYasue
The composition and layout of this artwork is visually so attractive. I like the clean cut geometry created by the key board and the contrast with a warm hand. The image seem to generate rhyme just by watching it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013

Thank you very much for your admirable comments about my artwork, and I also appreciate your 5-Star rating.

VMarguarite