Hidden in the Attic
A Mystery, Please read all of my comments26 total reviews
Comment from GaliaG
nice cover and nice story, but the empty areas around he book cover distracts and takes form the initial impact
good luck with the contest and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
nice cover and nice story, but the empty areas around he book cover distracts and takes form the initial impact
good luck with the contest and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you Galia, I appreciate your honest review very much! But I do not understand your suggestion, Empty areas? I need your help her, as the established Mixed Media you are. Which what else than color and light I could fill those areas, without distracting from the book, but still fill the requirements of the story? Please help. I am at loss with that.
Comment from trishgoody
Original and quirky , great story telling , full of intrigue with so much imagination . I found it fascinating and wish you luck and good fortune in one day making your book dream a reality.
As for the book cover, its creative, eye catching and well composed. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
Original and quirky , great story telling , full of intrigue with so much imagination . I found it fascinating and wish you luck and good fortune in one day making your book dream a reality.
As for the book cover, its creative, eye catching and well composed. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and your good wishes,
Comment from FBI GUY
What an imagination. The design will make a terrific cover for the future book of your imagination. The wording on the cover is very well laid out as well as is the font selections. The illustrations are wonderful and will be a great enhancement for the cover.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
What an imagination. The design will make a terrific cover for the future book of your imagination. The wording on the cover is very well laid out as well as is the font selections. The illustrations are wonderful and will be a great enhancement for the cover.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review your encouragement :-)
Comment from MKFlood
very cool. shame the contest is blind but ill be glad to sit of the sidelines and watch. the font is good. the spacing is good. the color is good. very creative and good job overall,.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
very cool. shame the contest is blind but ill be glad to sit of the sidelines and watch. the font is good. the spacing is good. the color is good. very creative and good job overall,.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Well, I would like a NOT BLIND contest much better myself, but the theme was to intriguing to ignore the contest. I would have been a honor and a challenge to have you in the competition.
Thank you very much for the review.
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thanks for the thought but to much work..only get to a puter for some much time. im here for name building only cant do that on blind contest..the non blind exposes my name by participation and really dont win those anyway but folks will remember the name..or at least they will say.. know the old sharpie dude..u know like a commercial..wink
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Who isn't here of the real serious guys to build a name? I am too. i know its pretty dumb, but I can never withstand a contest with a good theme, even if its blind.LOL
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oh i dont hold that against ya and theres is nuttin wrong with that.but im sticking to my guns..i dont do blind
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I don't hold that against you, either... I just down own guns.
Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Thanks for the interesting notes.
Excellent process to create this eye catching book cover.
Color contrast are visually appealing.
Simple but cool.
The gold on blue has strong initial impact as it can be readily read even from a distance if the the viewer is not near-sighted like me.
Thanks for sharing !
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
Thanks for the interesting notes.
Excellent process to create this eye catching book cover.
Color contrast are visually appealing.
Simple but cool.
The gold on blue has strong initial impact as it can be readily read even from a distance if the the viewer is not near-sighted like me.
Thanks for sharing !
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much. Your review is appreciated.
Comment from blujdrawings
not bad what you have one here
but i feel there would had been more impact if you cropped it so you only saw the book itself
there is some nice colour and expression
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
not bad what you have one here
but i feel there would had been more impact if you cropped it so you only saw the book itself
there is some nice colour and expression
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. This is not a photo, which could be cropped, because this book does not existed in reality. I made it up on the computer and put it into the background. The background is there in purpose, because otherwise the story would not work. You obviously did not read the comments. This is not made for the contest, but it is just happen that it feed into. This is an illustration for a children book, I am working on. The illustration starts to make sense if you read the Epilog and notes provided in my comments. :-)
Comment from click3333
What a wonderful story. I'm looking forward to seeing it published. Very creative story and creating this book cover. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
What a wonderful story. I'm looking forward to seeing it published. Very creative story and creating this book cover. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much for your kind review wishes. I am looking forward to seeing it published too; but that will probably never happen because it does not even have a publisher. :-)
Comment from debparks10
Interesting photo. A little confused as to, are you promoting your writing or your photography. I do like the the dragon and the story seems interesting. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
Interesting photo. A little confused as to, are you promoting your writing or your photography. I do like the the dragon and the story seems interesting. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you. I appreciate the time you needed to look at my picture and write the review. I do not promote my writing or my photography, because this book dos not exist in print and the picture is not a photo! This is an contest entry; entirely generated on the computer for a contest with a special theme. You evidently did not read the contest rules or my comments.
It would be nice if you would specify what you think is technically or artistically wrong with this Digital Composition. It would be more helpful to me, then a verbal attack on a 'promotion' which does not exist and probably would violate the rules. I am expecting your clarifying answer to my reply.
Thank you again for your time.
Comment from M. Celeste
I like your notes and how they lead the viewer to the picture of the book. I like how you made the book's cover look ragged and worn. Great storyline and very nice work on the cover.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
I like your notes and how they lead the viewer to the picture of the book. I like how you made the book's cover look ragged and worn. Great storyline and very nice work on the cover.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you! Your kind review is very much appreciated :-)
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
It is always nice to see alternate approaches. Creativity really speaks here.I also like the gentle overflow which seems to lead the gentleness of the flower.I also like the story which can have umpteen illustrations. This is a fine illustration. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
It is always nice to see alternate approaches. Creativity really speaks here.I also like the gentle overflow which seems to lead the gentleness of the flower.I also like the story which can have umpteen illustrations. This is a fine illustration. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you! Your review is very much appreciated.