Comment from csimmons032
This is a great and creative shot. I think the lighting could be better, but that's just my opinion. Your focus and framing are both very good. Well done! You did a great job :)

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014

Thanks so much for the nice review and rating! Lilibug6

reply by csimmons032 on 04-Sep-2014

Your welcome :)

Comment from Angelheart The First
Very nice capture of what a lot of parents look forward to.I like this composition and I get the impression that the kids are not really excited.I like the shadows of the kids and the blue sky is lovely.
33 years makes you a pro,my friend~
Angelheart :)

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014

Thanks so much Angel!=) I guess if I am not by now there is no hope for me! lol Have a great day my friend=)
Lilibug6

reply by Angelheart The First on 04-Sep-2014

LOL...You're welcome :)

Comment from BluiizCA
Oh this photo brings back memories of when my kids were little. I always loved the first day of school and they always hated it. Love the colors in the early morning sunshine and the way the front of the bus is just visible. Great photo.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014

Thanks so much for the very nice review and rating! I really appreciate it very much! Have a great night! Lilibug6

Comment from SteveANH
My word, you are a wonderful person to do all of this for these children.
I love the "lineup", all with backpacks. You even captured a nice little "gleam" off the bus window.

Nice.. good luck! :)

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014

Thank you so much for the very nice review and rating! I really appreciate it my friend! Have a great night! Lilibug6

Comment from Doris1022
LOL you have them trained right. lol

you must have been an army sargent. all those are yours?

impressive. pretty sky.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014

No five are grandkids! the rest are daycare! The other two not shown are mine they leave an hour earlier! LOL I have had most of these kids in my daycare since they were born=) Thanks so much for the very nice review and rating! Have a great night my friend=)
Lilibug6

Comment from softlyfallingamy
This is such a delightful shot of childhood! I think that these children should all have a copy of the photo to look back on and remember this.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014

Thanks so much for the very nice review and rating! I might just print these for them!=)
Have a great night! Lilibug6

Comment from MollysDaddy
This photo hits the heart strings with me as I am sure it does with many a parent. I love the composition with the bus being just in shot and the main focus being drawn to your children walking in a line to get on. The colours are also very complimentary with the yellows and green framing the children nicely. One minor thing I might do if it was mine would be to lighten the shadow on the far left.

A very lovely photo though :o).

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014

Thanks so much for the very nice review and rating! I really appreciate it very much! Lilibug6

Comment from horizontal1
Far distant memories of the first day of school (I've been told I had to be dragged there kicking and screaming)
Technically good throughout.
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014

Thanks so much for the very nice review and rating! I really appreciate it very much! Lilibug6

Comment from Mara del Mar
Excellent shot and very nice image of the morning. Love the color and contrast, nice illumination, texture, and sharp focus, like nice play of light and shadows, good composition and frame. Great job
Mara

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014

Thanks so much Mara! I really appreciate the very nice review and rating! Have a great day my friend! Lilibug6