Comment from snowblaze
I think way too much is going on in this photograph... the fruit could be more tightly cropped. Also, the burned parts of the photo are quite distracting.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks have reloaded with crop hopefully you prefer this version. :) Mary

reply by snowblaze on 07-Dec-2014

I like it better. You? (I adjusted the stars)

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, yes I do like it better and appreciate your honest reviews very much. :) Mary

reply by snowblaze on 07-Dec-2014

thanks. ...lots of people don't. (I have some people I really respect on FAR... and I like when they make suggestions.)

Comment from cleo85
Pitches? Mm! Yummy! I like your idea and how you have placed the fruit into about the middle of your depth and how you have framed the fruit with the leaves. I like your natural colors as well. I think some cropping could make the photo even more interesting. I believe the is to much negative space below which takes interest away from the peaches. I think a crop of about 2/3 of that space below would look more interesting. There is a slightly distracting white spot on the upper margin. A careful crop could take care of this problem as well.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks Cleo, I have reloaded with tighter crop hopefully you will prefer this version.

reply by cleo85 on 08-Dec-2014

Yes I do. I like it better.

Comment from Reganato
Very nice capture of the fruit tree in the scene you have presented here...very nice focus and clarity of the subject matter...nice tones of greens to draw in the eyes attention...well done and thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks Reganato, I have reloaded with tighter crop following suggestions from reviewers, hopefully you will prefer this version.

Comment from gidavidson
A very good view with shadows, focused and framed to show the healthy looking fruit awaiting lots of sun. Bet they are tasty when ripe and ready to eat.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks George, following suggestions from other reviewers I have reloaded with tighter crop.

reply by gidavidson on 07-Dec-2014

Like the tighter crop Mary. Good work.

Comment from PhotobySamSanchez
This is interesting especially to those that know these are in season. I like the perspective you chose. It is well framed but a bit dark. Could be upload.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks Sam, I have reloaded and cropped following suggestions from others. Hopefully you will approve of changes.

reply by PhotobySamSanchez on 07-Dec-2014

You are very welcome. We all learn from each other. Your photo does look better. Hope you like it too.

Comment from jrconrad
Nice idea. The composition is very nice. Focus nice and sharp. I'm not sure why the fruit is in the shade. The eye is drawn away from it to the leaves near the top. Cheers, JR

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

I have reloaded with tighter crop hopefully you will prefer this version. Thanks JR.

Comment from a.samathasena
What a great nice gorgeous lovely nature shot.Beautiful fruits,green leaves,tree branches are gorgeous and great.Soft Natural light and shadows are help for the scene.Great nice nature work and scene.Focus color and all are excellent.Great job.Well Done.Thanks.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, I have reloaded with tighter crop hopefully you will prefer this version.