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Comment from rasmine
Okay, this is just beautiful.
I love your lines, colors, and textures. The sun is just awesome!"Hello flowerlings, I'm Flower Power, protector and superhero to all." He glanced into each flowerling,'s eyes then continued, "flowerling adults, their children, all insects, animals, and humans. If anyone is in trouble, I will hear their call.
"I also educate flowerlings and hope the knowledge spreads to all.
"I met my sensei, a golden, magical dragonfly, and she taught me about compassion. This was after I started dating my friend, Rose. I thought my friend Jay had insulted her, so I used my hands and not my words.
"Goldie showed and taught me that violence is never the answer - it is much better to use your words.
"She taught me Aikido, which is only used as a last resort. It is based on having love for your enemy, if it is necessary to protect others.
"Do you have any questions?"
I just have one observation: why don't you include your poem with the illustration?
I'm on Fanstory, didn't know you were there also!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Okay, this is just beautiful.
I love your lines, colors, and textures. The sun is just awesome!"Hello flowerlings, I'm Flower Power, protector and superhero to all." He glanced into each flowerling,'s eyes then continued, "flowerling adults, their children, all insects, animals, and humans. If anyone is in trouble, I will hear their call.
"I also educate flowerlings and hope the knowledge spreads to all.
"I met my sensei, a golden, magical dragonfly, and she taught me about compassion. This was after I started dating my friend, Rose. I thought my friend Jay had insulted her, so I used my hands and not my words.
"Goldie showed and taught me that violence is never the answer - it is much better to use your words.
"She taught me Aikido, which is only used as a last resort. It is based on having love for your enemy, if it is necessary to protect others.
"Do you have any questions?"
I just have one observation: why don't you include your poem with the illustration?
I'm on Fanstory, didn't know you were there also!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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thank you-I use several different pseudonyms because lab st barths Human Research used to trawl all my work, wipe it off and use it for themselves, Beta poets etc I came to USA twice to poetry conventions and got many, many editors certs prizes etc my degree was literature.They still trawl my work but now I tell everyone on Facebook //Fletcher Bounty// I was scared for my children before but I am getting old now. That is why I went to China to teach. ''the sun stopped shining for me ... is this one.
Comment from Linda Wetzel
I cannot read your poem for this piece as I am not a member of the writing site. The lone woman facing the world is symbolic of how many of us feel when life changing disappointments occur. The gray and blue canopy on the tree to me represents the good or bad consequences of the choices we make.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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I cannot read your poem for this piece as I am not a member of the writing site. The lone woman facing the world is symbolic of how many of us feel when life changing disappointments occur. The gray and blue canopy on the tree to me represents the good or bad consequences of the choices we make.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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thank you-- somewhere on this site it asks us not to write our poetry with paintings, but to join FanStoryReview. com. it is a part of the same site as this one, so I did, though this is my favourite site and I have been a member many, many years. There is also a FanMusicReview.com
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
This is a very eyecatching illustration.Wonderful use of colours and forms. Did not know that you are a poet too.The composition is creative and well planned. Overall a fine effort!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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This is a very eyecatching illustration.Wonderful use of colours and forms. Did not know that you are a poet too.The composition is creative and well planned. Overall a fine effort!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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thank you- I write poetry books. My degree was literature - and after school I worked on a newspaper. My father was a journalist - political satirist.//the sun stopped shining for me- is the poem to this water colour sketch./ I am having another three printed shortly however, west indian thieves, who have robbed 1600 paintings, 1000+ sketches, 300 stories 60 dairies plus much more, from my home also took a box of books ready for printing from my loft. Domestic theft is no longer a crime in England, so no help from anyone. PM Cameron cut the police force and we do not have room in the prisons, Tony Blaire wanted to put prison ships on the Thames. The Syrians and west indians and also Slovaks thieve like we breath air!
Comment from Yogendra R Modak
Anather great expressive traditional art by great traditional artist.the way of showing big tree warming view with the sun light at upper right corner looking so well ,one standing lady enjoying scenery of sun rays view well to show,great art,great artist.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Anather great expressive traditional art by great traditional artist.the way of showing big tree warming view with the sun light at upper right corner looking so well ,one standing lady enjoying scenery of sun rays view well to show,great art,great artist.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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thank you-- the sun did not shine for me any more..t hat is the poem to this painting.
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