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A Crashing Entrance

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Comment from Envision


Nice job emphasizing the force behind the crashing in of the door. I can feel it hitting the wall and rattling the pictures. Good work on the expressions of the flowers as usual! The colors are nice too.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from cakemp55


I love it! Great expressions and the picture certainly tells a story loud and clear. Your bright varying colours allow the characters to 'pop' . good entertainment!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    thanks for the great review.
Comment from SCHATZLING


I am certain Rasmine's book will be absolutely wonderful especially with you as the artist. I really like this drawing in particular for some reason....maye it is the bright yellow wall or the photo hanging asque. Or Maybe it is the look of the super heroes expression....or maybe it is the glasses she is wearing. Everything is nicely done. Since I am a member for Fan Story, I will go and search and read every chapter Rasmine has written thus far. I may not write Reviews of every one of your works of art, but do know I enjoy them very much so.

Was just curious....have you ever drawn a flower that was overweight.....chunky?

THANKS for sharing your work and for the news about Rasmine.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    yep..one of my "Funnie Flowers" cartoons titled "I Hate Mirrors". you a search it on here..wink. thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dick Lee Shia


Dynamic creation with a well timed still motion rendition!

Creative concept. Innovative approach. Imaginative presentation.

Harmonious brown door against a vibrant yellow wall colors.
Crisp & clear outlines.
Great story telling factor.

Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from Malmax


An excellent drawing of the request with grand
expressions and perfect artistry. The colors are fabulous and the detail as usual is just amazing.
Can't wait to see more!
Malmax

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the great review
reply by Malmax on 20-Mar-2018
    My pleasure
Comment from Denise B


Fun. Can't wait until it's done. Love the expressions. Good detail as usual and I like the use of shadows. Love the addition of the painting on the wall hanging crooked because of the door being kicked in. You've thought of it all

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from Stringbean


What a wonderful scene for art work for Rasmines children's novel. You tell the story so well of the worlds first flower super heroes. Nice actions drawing and excellent facial expressions with incredible details. You are so talented with those bic sharpies. Outstanding and creative art work. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from csimmons032


This seems like a very interesting book. I like how you added those white swoops to make it look like the door was being slammed open really fast. He looks like a flower on a mission ;) You did a fantastic job and I thank you for sharing this fun drawing with us :)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the great review
reply by csimmons032 on 17-Mar-2018
    You're welcome :)
Comment from GaliaG


Yes, I am here and I know what need to be done, good for him

excellent story telling, composition, creativity and initial impact

thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from Mike Coffman


I love that someone is still expressing their views through illustration. Great facial expressions really puts a story together and gives us something to relate too. Thank you for your submission great work.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Folks always correct me when I say I'm a cartoonist and illustrator. Claiming there is no difference. My response is not true.. don't create due to a mood or expression..I'm a story teller by illustrations..wink. thanks for the great review