Reviews from

Star girl 3

Pastel and charcoal

9 total reviews 
Comment from Dick Lee Shia


Cute pose with the right curves at the right places.
An impressive artwork rendition. B&W creation with excellent strokes & textures. Good compositional style. Great overall impact!

Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much
Comment from Malmax


This charcoal drawing is fantastic and another beautiful one of your mastery of the female form. Wonderfully seductive and shaded to perfection. This is subtlely soft and sexy and shows off your wonderful talent. Pleasure to view.
Malmax

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much
reply by Malmax on 16-Jun-2018
    My pleasure James
Comment from Miranda Langston


I absolutely love this one. I love the innocent look in her eyes and the really sexy body suit. Hair is one of the hardest things to draw in my opinion and you also drew her hair perfectly.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much
Comment from GaliaG


Impressive draw, love the BW rending and her facial expression

excellent technique, creativity and initial impact

a pleasure to view

thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much
Comment from Trajan


Nice job on this Jesuel! Her frame is well captured. Good rendering and shading through the subject.
Great job on the hair and material over her body.

The real distract is the big white swath. I get what you are going for but it's a bit heavy handed.
It looks like Zeus through a lighting bolt through her.
Please tone this down and you will have a superb masterpiece!



 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much
reply by Trajan on 16-Jun-2018
    Hi! Do you see what I mean about the lighting bolt? What are your thoughts?
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    It?s not a lightning bolt it?s a galaxy only so much you can do with charcoal and pastel or maybe something else you have to look closely and you will see it
reply by Trajan on 16-Jun-2018
    Hi. Okay. So you might want to take off quite a bit of the white.
    Really dial it back and then softly with a smudge stick start giving it a very fine glow. Smudge softly.
    I really love the figure in this.
    Quite superb. It?s just the big galaxy distracts you know what I mean?
Comment from alaskapat


Very well drawn, beautiful sultry lady with long wavy blonde hair, she's very scantily dressed, her body is well formed and proportionate, her facial features are well applied and beautiful, very nice work here,very well presented!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much
Comment from Sean T Phelan


Cool,James!
She's well rendered,pleasantly sexy looking,and quite a lot of fun to look at!
I doubt that there's much more that needs to be said!
'Good Show',my friend! : )
~Sean

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much sean
reply by Sean T Phelan on 16-Jun-2018
    You're very welcome,James! : )
Comment from dalebraatz


She sure is a star, very good details and depth, face very well done along with everything else, a pleasure to look at, thank you for sharing, dale

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much
reply by dalebraatz on 13-Jun-2018
    Your welcome
Comment from MKFlood


Oh yeah she is star to me as well.. lol. The facial expression is excellent. The body form and language is hot. The shading is excellent. The depth is excellent. The details is excellent. The creation is well balance and very eye appealing to the viewer. Very creative and awesome work overall bro(standing clapping and cheering) woohoo

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
    Thank you so very very much number one