Life's Twilight
for music video29 total reviews
Comment from Danielle Andrukitis
Wow! You did a wonderful job portraying such a tender moment in life. It is very relatable and touching. The colors and details are excellent.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Wow! You did a wonderful job portraying such a tender moment in life. It is very relatable and touching. The colors and details are excellent.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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thanks for the great review
Comment from Lilibug6
This is very well done! The image is very thought provoking and tells the story very well! I love the song that goes with this too! The colors are great! The characters are very good! Well done and thanks for sharing! Lori
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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This is very well done! The image is very thought provoking and tells the story very well! I love the song that goes with this too! The colors are great! The characters are very good! Well done and thanks for sharing! Lori
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the great review
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My pleasure! Lori
Comment from Lucien van Oosten
The Idea behind the drawing, of it being the beginning of end comes across dramatically.
The color harmony is good, for the most part, the red seems to strong for the other colors used, and I think need to be toned down some.
more importantly, I do think that the perspective somehow seems off to me on the old man in the bed. However, for me the main issue are the arms under the covers of the old man they seem odd. They seem too short, like stubs and that throws off the entire balance of the drawing for me and is a detractor to the overall flow of the piece.
Those are the reason for the less than perfect rating.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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The Idea behind the drawing, of it being the beginning of end comes across dramatically.
The color harmony is good, for the most part, the red seems to strong for the other colors used, and I think need to be toned down some.
more importantly, I do think that the perspective somehow seems off to me on the old man in the bed. However, for me the main issue are the arms under the covers of the old man they seem odd. They seem too short, like stubs and that throws off the entire balance of the drawing for me and is a detractor to the overall flow of the piece.
Those are the reason for the less than perfect rating.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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No worries. I agree with the tone on this one. If you see the others I did after this one that color down. Also I told myself after doing this I should have drawn his arms over the colors. Anyway it will still work for this video. It's just a few seconds laying out the last part of the story. Thanks Penmaster for the review (thumbs up)
Comment from willie
Another interesting image.
This is a real story teller.
It is impressive to me with you using the sharpies. Very nice work. I wish I could do things like this. I just use the camera.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Another interesting image.
This is a real story teller.
It is impressive to me with you using the sharpies. Very nice work. I wish I could do things like this. I just use the camera.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Look at like this Willie .God paints the image he puts before you. It's up to your talent to capture that...wink.. thanks for the great review
Comment from Jack Moore
I have looked at your work now for a while and as I looked at this piece I just noticed the shadows on the wall, I don't think that many people who draw would ever think of doing that and maybe I might be wrong but to me I think that it is really deep, it looks like there might be a light on the other side of the room. As usual thanks for sharing and definitely keep up the great work my friend. Have a great day. JackJr.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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I have looked at your work now for a while and as I looked at this piece I just noticed the shadows on the wall, I don't think that many people who draw would ever think of doing that and maybe I might be wrong but to me I think that it is really deep, it looks like there might be a light on the other side of the room. As usual thanks for sharing and definitely keep up the great work my friend. Have a great day. JackJr.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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its cool when folks notice small things like this..wink.. thanks Jack for the great review.
Comment from michiganmike
I am just a couple of months from being 75 and really don't look forward to this kind of a situation. A very nice drawing though that reinforces my claim on independence.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I am just a couple of months from being 75 and really don't look forward to this kind of a situation. A very nice drawing though that reinforces my claim on independence.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from karen zima
Sounds like a great project that is very time consuming. All your drawings are wonderful and tell a great story. This one looks sad and full of emotion. Love the framing and composition.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Sounds like a great project that is very time consuming. All your drawings are wonderful and tell a great story. This one looks sad and full of emotion. Love the framing and composition.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Posted more after this one..wink . thanks for the awesome review
Comment from Lasso the Moon
Excellent details for the people. Wondering if he doesn't have hands? Not sure how you could show it, but feel it would improve the picture. See the pain in the visitor's faces. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Excellent details for the people. Wondering if he doesn't have hands? Not sure how you could show it, but feel it would improve the picture. See the pain in the visitor's faces. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Under the blanket.. wink.. thanks for the great review
Comment from iPhone7
Ah another good one. I know exactly where this one goes. drawings do you think there will be Perfect. I am anxiously awaiting to see the finished product. How many more drawings do you think there will be? Keep on keepin' on ~ Top
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Ah another good one. I know exactly where this one goes. drawings do you think there will be Perfect. I am anxiously awaiting to see the finished product. How many more drawings do you think there will be? Keep on keepin' on ~ Top
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I figured 30 to 32 to make it pan out and keep with the story. I think I'll have it 5 minutes or less. Thanks for the great review
Comment from Barbara L.
This is a good depiction of a a very sad scene! From the expression on the elderly man's face I can see that he is suffering very much. I can see that his family is very sad.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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This is a good depiction of a a very sad scene! From the expression on the elderly man's face I can see that he is suffering very much. I can see that his family is very sad.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thanks for the great review