Comment from iPhone7
Great one Troop. As we well know from the military and those often miserable times we sometimes had: It was (is) all Temporary. To have that attitude in life will add Years to our health. I always remember: If we are depressed we are living in the past. If we are anxious we are living in the future. If we are at peace we are living in the Present. There is a drawing for that in this story I think. Keep on keepin' on Mark ~ Steve

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Things are peaceful here on the home front. (Thumbs up). Thanks Top for the great review

Comment from alaskapat
Very well rendered, impressive to view all of the detail here, I really like the red brick wall and can see the time it took just for that part, the little blonde boy looks happy, he's got a toy truck and a green ball, I love the way you show the shadows. It's a wooden floor and again, the detail is impressive. Very well rendered and presented!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Thanks for the great review

Comment from shoregrass
I like this one with a bright big smile. Maybe his time not so temporary. Keep up the great work on this. Looking forward to the video.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Thanks for the great review

reply by shoregrass on 07-Oct-2018

Very welcome

Comment from dalebraatz
A wonderful story telling work of art, like the colors and details and depth, can't wait to see the video, a pleasure to look at, thank you for sharing, dale

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Thanks for the great review

reply by dalebraatz on 07-Oct-2018

Your welcome

Comment from SandraInSpain
Another stunning illustration for your project. She's happy - for now. Is it the home that's only temporary, or the happiness? There are a lot of questions here.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Thanks for the great review

Comment from michiganmike
I guess that reality is only temporary. A nice drawing that shows the child in a barren and somewhat desolate condition. I like the shadows and the open arms. Good luck with your project.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Thanks for the great review

Comment from GaliaG
Life are temporary, so why house should not be

excellent draw of her facial expression and shadow

excellent technique, use of color and presentation

thanks for sharing


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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Thanks for the great review