Comment from Brendaartwork18
Interesting composition of 2 students chatting rather than studying. You capture a conversation in progress. The scene is in what looks to be a class room Attractive colours . Your story fits and is well written.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

thank you- my stories always fit!! Life is stranger than fiction, which is why we try to normalise it all the while, which is what those who commit crimes play on.

reply by Brendaartwork18 on 13-Dec-2018

Yes sadly so

Comment from alaskapat
Wow! Very interesting artists notes and very good advice you gave! It's true ! The kids today are taught that college is the only way to succeed! We need skilled labor, we need cooks and hair stylists and mechanics! This is well rendered , the two young women are engrossed in conversation , discussing something of importance to them! I like ve the colors and the hair on both of them! Very well presented!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

thank you, I remember being young and to me then, the most important factor in my life was whether my hair suited me. I have not forgotten. Ah youth!! Do you realise, long ago, when mankind died at twenty and thirty, they would only have had immediate thoughts, and not much time for deep thinking!