Comment from supergold
a very good entry to the smile and laughter contest with one of the boys is smiling while the other seems serious;
I would crop some of the very busy bg;

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019

Thank you!

Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Aptly captured for the contest theme...
Amusing reaction as the other kid seems so serious...
Didn't he laugh at his funny joke?!?

Great story telling factor.

Cropping that distracting bright sky won't hurt unless you'll behead those two in the background....;-)

Pale colors...is this an old photo?

Dynamic diagonal framing.
Best of luck in the contest!
Good perspective & long depth of field...

Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019

yes, it is an old photo. Also, the boys were in a shaded picnic area. Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from michiganmike
A nice candid shot. I like the composition although the background is a bit cluttered. Very nice expressions and good colors. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019

Sorry for the slow response. I thank you for the nice review and you are right about the background.