Reviews from

Are you alright?

graphite pencil line drawing

21 total reviews 
Comment from Renate-Bertodi


this is beautiful and sensitive. You must have some horses near by there, for you to view and to be able to catch the tiniest minute of their faces. Really well drawn.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
    Renate,

    my apologies for the late reply, time got away from me.
    Thank you for the 6 star review and your support of me and my work, it is truly appreciated.

    Take care and stay safe.
    Cheers
    Lucien
Comment from Linda Prebyl


Yes, they are concerned and to do it with just pencil is amazing. You are definitely following your career path. Keep up your amazing work, I love seeing them.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Linda,

    Thank you, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.
    I am very pleased you love it, that comment means a lot.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
Comment from Christina Bias1


You definitely captured that feeling of concern and also I think love. This is such a sweet and beautifully done drawing. You did a great job on the line work and captured so much emotion.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Chritstina,


    Thank you, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. and the 6 star rating, it is an honor to receive that on any piece posted here on FAR, and for me as an artist on a simple line piece makes it even more of a reward.

    Especially since I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
Comment from Kevin Williams


Nice drawing of the two horses. Although I would like to have seen more of the two horses faces and more shading to highlight certain areas. Nice work with the eyes. Would like to have seen a little more detail with the hair as well. I like the emotion conveyed through the eyes of the horses. It tells a lot of how their feeling.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Kevin,

    Thank you, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.
    I do understand your request for more shading and rendering, but this piece is entered in a line art contest.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
Comment from Shadow catcher


A great drawing conveying different emotions in these two horses. It's obvious that the horse on the right is either depressed or not feeling well by the downcast eye. the horse on the left is nuzzling him,a look of concern/questioning in it's eye,trying to find out what is wrong. A lovely portrayal showing the empathy animals can have for one another.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    shadow catcher,

    Thank you once again, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
Comment from Esther Parr


I have three horses and I can see that you have captured the concern on the face of the horse on the left. The horse on the right does seem to be feeling very low. They do have many expressions and mine comfort one another from time to time.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    Esther,

    Thank you once again, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.


    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
Comment from mamamary


I love horses. They are beautiful creatures. I believe you have shown the feeling of concern. I have studied horses, especially thoroughbreds, and I find the composition of the heads of these horses to be lacking a bit. The horse on the left needs more definition at the bottom of his head, kind of his cheek area. I believe the eyes need to be larger as well. I didn't mark down for this because you did get your primary objective. You have been missed.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    mamamary,

    thank you once again, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.
    And also say I have been missed, that was very kind comment for you to say to me, makes me feel good.

    also, I do see what you mean regarding the horse on the left, that his cheek area could have been a little larger. About the eyes, however, I thought making them any larger would no have shown as much empathy, or concern.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
reply by mamamary on 28-Aug-2020
    You are so very welcome. I'm glad you are OK.
Comment from alaskapat


I love horses, so I automatically like this piece, I see the look of caring and concern on the horse on left, they are well created with nice shape and structure of the horse heads m good show of the mane , well shown eyes. Good entry to this contest. Best wishes to you!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Alaskapat.

    Thank you once again, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.
    Also thank you for the well wishes for the piece in the up coming contest.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan


Very impressive delineation. You have capture d the expressions and lines of the horses very well. The strokes look easy on the eyes. Well done! Good luck!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Seshadri;

    thank you once again, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.
    Also thank you for the well wishes for the piece in the up coming contest.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien
Comment from jesuel


what a great drawing horses are majestic animals and this is a good drawing the shading is well done the muscle structure is great fine work here

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Jesuel,

    thank you once again, for your support of my artwork and me, it is greatly appreciated. And for your high praise of artistic skills, I like doing these types of drawings were you are trying to show a lot, in this case empathy, with as few lines as possible.

    Stay safe and take care.

    Cheers,
    Lucien