pointillism book IV
Viewing comments for Page 4 "Birds of Prey, Collage II"these are drawings done entirely by dots by hand.
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Comment from kleb59
Very good collage. Your details of the birds is excellent. I like the way you put them together. I love that you added the prey to this. Excellent work... must take alot of patience to do all those dots.
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Very good collage. Your details of the birds is excellent. I like the way you put them together. I love that you added the prey to this. Excellent work... must take alot of patience to do all those dots.
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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kleb59, thank you for the time and the review, and noticing the subtle stuff... have great evening and cheers... LvO
Comment from Dark Duck
I love the pointalism, the composition is to busy for me. I think maybe you should take the owls out, they take away from the eagles. Technique is great, you do a wonderful job in pointalism, shading is excellent. Thanks for sharing. Marti
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I love the pointalism, the composition is to busy for me. I think maybe you should take the owls out, they take away from the eagles. Technique is great, you do a wonderful job in pointalism, shading is excellent. Thanks for sharing. Marti
Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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Marti, sorry to hear you do not like the composition, but even the eagle needs compition, sometimes...thank you for the kind words within the reveiw, much appreciated... take acre and cheers... LvO
Comment from Pixie Chick
Each one of these birds of prey would be nice all by itself but put them together in a collage and you have so much to look at and it is all great.
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Each one of these birds of prey would be nice all by itself but put them together in a collage and you have so much to look at and it is all great.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
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Pixie Chick, thank you for taking the time and then writing the review... really appreciated by me.. take care and as always cheers... LvO
Comment from swampfox
Great artistry. I especially like the owl. I love the luminosity produced by the pointillism method and it works very well and you seem to have a good hand for it. The only point that I can possibly make is that I feel that the mighty eagle is taking a back seat to the owl since the owl is so well done. I also feel that, seeing your talents, you could have portrayed the eagle slightly better in a better position of capture. I know that you were possibly pressed for room and its just a thought. Hope I didn't ruffle any feathers. Good job and thanks for sharing.
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Great artistry. I especially like the owl. I love the luminosity produced by the pointillism method and it works very well and you seem to have a good hand for it. The only point that I can possibly make is that I feel that the mighty eagle is taking a back seat to the owl since the owl is so well done. I also feel that, seeing your talents, you could have portrayed the eagle slightly better in a better position of capture. I know that you were possibly pressed for room and its just a thought. Hope I didn't ruffle any feathers. Good job and thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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swampfox, sorry you did not like the composition, but... thank you for the time and the reveiw, much appreciated... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from njb_eastcoast_sunset
OK First I would like to know How Long does it take you to do a piece like this? You have a Great talent! Every dot is positioned in the right spot! I Like that you have included their prey in the collage and the moon with the trees for those owls that feed at night! Great Work!
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OK First I would like to know How Long does it take you to do a piece like this? You have a Great talent! Every dot is positioned in the right spot! I Like that you have included their prey in the collage and the moon with the trees for those owls that feed at night! Great Work!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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NJB, several weeks(like 100 plus hours) to come up with the composition and then to actually lay down all the dots... thank you the reveiw, much appreciated... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from waxartfan
What a time consuming job but the picture is just wonderful. You did a great job.
I like the details in all your birds and the action of the eagle flying down for its prey.
The owl is great two and I like how you have the eagle as a bird of prey but looks so gentle when she is feeding her babies.
Adding this into my favorites.
waxartfan
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What a time consuming job but the picture is just wonderful. You did a great job.
I like the details in all your birds and the action of the eagle flying down for its prey.
The owl is great two and I like how you have the eagle as a bird of prey but looks so gentle when she is feeding her babies.
Adding this into my favorites.
waxartfan
Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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waxartfan, thank you for the time and the kind reveiw, much appreciated... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from DaveChappell
I really liked the last one of these you did, and this one is every bit as beautiful! The details are exquisite and you've blended them together like a master! Great job,
Dave
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I really liked the last one of these you did, and this one is every bit as beautiful! The details are exquisite and you've blended them together like a master! Great job,
Dave
Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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Dave, pleased you like this one as much as the last one, thank you for the kind words within the reveiw, much appreciated... take care and as always, cheers... LvO
Comment from Dazzleme
Wonderful job here. I like the display of birds of prey in this one. Good technqiue you have for sketching this. The pen and ink works well for this composition. Great use of canvas. Your talent is wonderful. I cannot believe you have used dots with this! Awesome skill you have!
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Wonderful job here. I like the display of birds of prey in this one. Good technqiue you have for sketching this. The pen and ink works well for this composition. Great use of canvas. Your talent is wonderful. I cannot believe you have used dots with this! Awesome skill you have!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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Dazzleme, thank you for the kind words within your reveiw, much appreciated... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from LOOMISART
this is a very very good piece of art you have made here. the idea of this piece is a very very excellent one. you have a great hand for it.
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this is a very very good piece of art you have made here. the idea of this piece is a very very excellent one. you have a great hand for it.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2006
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Loomisart, thank you for the kind words within the reveiw, much appreciated... take care and cheers... LvO