Hello Mister Broom!
for Dustbunny story18 total reviews
Comment from Way West
I just love this kind looking broom showing that all is ready! Great characterization! He is well posed and so fun to look at. The painting on the wall behind him is a nice touch! Can't wait to see more!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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I just love this kind looking broom showing that all is ready! Great characterization! He is well posed and so fun to look at. The painting on the wall behind him is a nice touch! Can't wait to see more!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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thanks for the great review.
Comment from Sange
I often wish my broom at work work have Arma and legs and I could just whistle for it to do a clean up! :)
I think he is cute. I like the details right down to his shadow.
Well done Mark :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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I often wish my broom at work work have Arma and legs and I could just whistle for it to do a clean up! :)
I think he is cute. I like the details right down to his shadow.
Well done Mark :)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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be kinda like Fantasia ..have the brooms walking around doing the work..yeah i can see that happen..lol. thanks for the great review.
Comment from jesuel
what an amazing piece of art I really like the shading definitely not easy to do with markers let alone with pencils and I like the perspective beautiful work here
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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what an amazing piece of art I really like the shading definitely not easy to do with markers let alone with pencils and I like the perspective beautiful work here
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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thanks #1 for the great review
Comment from Barbara L.
I think a broom would be frightening to a dust bunny, but not as frightening as the vacuum cleaner in the last illustration I reviewed. I wonder why he's doing the "thumbs up". Maybe that's explained in the story.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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I think a broom would be frightening to a dust bunny, but not as frightening as the vacuum cleaner in the last illustration I reviewed. I wonder why he's doing the "thumbs up". Maybe that's explained in the story.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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yeah the writer has Mr. Broom as a friend..he pushes dustbunny around and warns him that cleaning is near..kinda of a cute story helvi2 created..thanks for the great review.
Comment from Artistsushma
Ahh- so cute and so beautifully done!! I love the happy spirit created !! That thumbs up and smile!! Love the way you split the bottom part of broom in two to make two resting limbs with feet!! Ingenuity at its cutest- applause
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Ahh- so cute and so beautifully done!! I love the happy spirit created !! That thumbs up and smile!! Love the way you split the bottom part of broom in two to make two resting limbs with feet!! Ingenuity at its cutest- applause
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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thanks for the great review.
Comment from Renate-Bertodi
I rather like this for personal reasons. My mum Austro- hungarian loved music. Not long after I came over here to England and got to know her- we lived in the poorest part of town ofcourse being proper refugees, /not this new sort called 'economic' as they refer to them, -actually only illegal immigrants? /She used to do her best, but her nature and the 'old times' took over at times. I came home from school when I was about ten, looked through the window and saw her - humming a walz at full pelt and dancing round the kitchen with -- the broom! I said nothing ofcourse and she stopped the second she heard the door! I also have music pelting out in my kitchen and dance with the broom!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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I rather like this for personal reasons. My mum Austro- hungarian loved music. Not long after I came over here to England and got to know her- we lived in the poorest part of town ofcourse being proper refugees, /not this new sort called 'economic' as they refer to them, -actually only illegal immigrants? /She used to do her best, but her nature and the 'old times' took over at times. I came home from school when I was about ten, looked through the window and saw her - humming a walz at full pelt and dancing round the kitchen with -- the broom! I said nothing ofcourse and she stopped the second she heard the door! I also have music pelting out in my kitchen and dance with the broom!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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thanks for the great review.
Comment from Bill Bistak
I can almost see this character moving and sweeping! Love the familiar expression and mannerisms. I can easily see this in a storied format in a major publication!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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I can almost see this character moving and sweeping! Love the familiar expression and mannerisms. I can easily see this in a storied format in a major publication!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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lol..yeah i still have one more character to do for the writer..thanks Bill for the great review.
Comment from michiganmike
He does not look like a classic anti-hero, but that must be his role if the hero is a dust bunny. A fine drawing with very attractive colors for a broom.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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He does not look like a classic anti-hero, but that must be his role if the hero is a dust bunny. A fine drawing with very attractive colors for a broom.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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thanks Mike for the great review.
Comment from Jewell McChesney
So are you saying that Helvi2 has written a story about Dust Bunnies? She is a dear friend of my past fro Fanstory. I'll have to go check it out.
I very much enjoyed your personification of the room. It's very cute. Good job, as always
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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So are you saying that Helvi2 has written a story about Dust Bunnies? She is a dear friend of my past fro Fanstory. I'll have to go check it out.
I very much enjoyed your personification of the room. It's very cute. Good job, as always
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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she is a member on this side as well. she is my mix media artist on our music video creating team..and she writes as well. check out the music video we did for Supergold..you can find it on our profile page ( either supergold, malmax, helvi2 or mine)..thanks for the great review.
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Yes, I follow her. She is a dear friend and likes to collaborate with me on some of my writing. I am VisionaryPoet on Fanstory.
Comment from eileen0204
haha this guys is ready to bust some dust no matter where it is!
A great piece MK, and I'm sure Helvi is over the moon happy with this.. great work!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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haha this guys is ready to bust some dust no matter where it is!
A great piece MK, and I'm sure Helvi is over the moon happy with this.. great work!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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I dont know if you caught the 1st post (dustbunny hop)..check it out when you get the chance
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thanks I will!