
The Beginning of my Art Journey
Viewing comments for Page 3 "My fun Free style Bird"My Journey begins here with F.A.R
7 total reviews
Comment from MKFlood
Oh wow. I kept flipping my tablet to try to see the bird. Then it dawn on me..your trying to do a peacocks facial. Some shading and details are more needed to mold this birds head. Now the blend of the colors is ok. Depth is needed..shading is needed. More details is needed. The creation is balance and eye interesting to the viewer. Still presentation needs to be a lil better. Still ok job overall.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Oh wow. I kept flipping my tablet to try to see the bird. Then it dawn on me..your trying to do a peacocks facial. Some shading and details are more needed to mold this birds head. Now the blend of the colors is ok. Depth is needed..shading is needed. More details is needed. The creation is balance and eye interesting to the viewer. Still presentation needs to be a lil better. Still ok job overall.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you and as always god bless
Comment from Julie Lois Lau
A nice cartoony bird, and I'll bet you had fun smearing the paint around. Good idea to melt it - usual treatment is with turps or some other oil solvent, and a brush. Top marks for innovation!
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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A nice cartoony bird, and I'll bet you had fun smearing the paint around. Good idea to melt it - usual treatment is with turps or some other oil solvent, and a brush. Top marks for innovation!
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Chaxl
I couldn't agree more in what you said. I am n photographer with no fancy equipme4nt, but yet I have photos in 8 states because I just make it work. Great art piece with vivid colors and clear detail.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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I couldn't agree more in what you said. I am n photographer with no fancy equipme4nt, but yet I have photos in 8 states because I just make it work. Great art piece with vivid colors and clear detail.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Glena Jessee-King
In this style, this is adorable. But isn't it art rather than for photo contest? At first, I couldn't see the bird but as it went downward, I saw the complete image. God bless you too. This is really good to have used such cheap materials. I really enjoyed your narrative and you are so right, in my opinion.
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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In this style, this is adorable. But isn't it art rather than for photo contest? At first, I couldn't see the bird but as it went downward, I saw the complete image. God bless you too. This is really good to have used such cheap materials. I really enjoyed your narrative and you are so right, in my opinion.
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thanks
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Welcome, artist friend Jennifer.
Comment from Ray Gordon
This is came out fine. beautiful colors and nice design. I think you missed this, it is a contest for photography, probably just an oversight. Remember how you should date your sketch pad work, the same thing here so you can look back and see your progress. Nicely done. Ray
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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This is came out fine. beautiful colors and nice design. I think you missed this, it is a contest for photography, probably just an oversight. Remember how you should date your sketch pad work, the same thing here so you can look back and see your progress. Nicely done. Ray
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thank you
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Jennifer, you are welcome. Ray
Comment from nikman
A good looking image posted here into the competition! Your imaginative composition offers us a fascinating portrait to enjoy. Textures, colours and tones are good. Well painted and good luck!
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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A good looking image posted here into the competition! Your imaginative composition offers us a fascinating portrait to enjoy. Textures, colours and tones are good. Well painted and good luck!
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Yes I?m excited about this one thank you very much and as always God bless
Comment from helvi2
HI Jennifer, I like you cartoon bird. I think it's very cute! Love the shy way it appears. The big eye is very cool. I like the way you figured out how to make the paints work for you. Your image brought a smile to my face. Nicely done and a lot of fun to view! Good Luck in the Coontest! :o) Helvi
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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HI Jennifer, I like you cartoon bird. I think it's very cute! Love the shy way it appears. The big eye is very cool. I like the way you figured out how to make the paints work for you. Your image brought a smile to my face. Nicely done and a lot of fun to view! Good Luck in the Coontest! :o) Helvi
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you so much every time I look at it it brings a big smile to my face too! knowing I can create my own style of art is so joyful and I?m even more happy and excited that people out there are smiling right back to my art thank you and as always God bless
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I feel the same way when people enjoy my work! There is no better feeling than knowing your work made someone smile! :o)
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Totally agree with you thank you
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You're very welcome! :o)