Innocence
Little girl looking at fireflies2 total reviews
Comment from Glena Jessee-King
Beautiful digital artwork, indeed with a theme of innocence, her gazing at the jar of fire flies. I like your narrative and sharing of yourself as a girl. Since you say it is a work in progress, a skilled one I say, there are a couple of things that would make it perfect. Her legs between the socks and the pants edges' look like they many have hosiery and, more importantly, up from her closed left (my right), there is a brown line smudge that needs smoothing. I'll give you a "6" if you change these, particularly the latter, while I still have them. Thanks.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Beautiful digital artwork, indeed with a theme of innocence, her gazing at the jar of fire flies. I like your narrative and sharing of yourself as a girl. Since you say it is a work in progress, a skilled one I say, there are a couple of things that would make it perfect. Her legs between the socks and the pants edges' look like they many have hosiery and, more importantly, up from her closed left (my right), there is a brown line smudge that needs smoothing. I'll give you a "6" if you change these, particularly the latter, while I still have them. Thanks.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much for the nice review. Yeah I see the smudge now. I'll go back and fix it later. :)
Comment from nikman
A good looking image posted here into the competition! Your fine, full and appropriate composition offers us an enjoyable view of that young girl fascinated by those insects. Well created and good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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A good looking image posted here into the competition! Your fine, full and appropriate composition offers us an enjoyable view of that young girl fascinated by those insects. Well created and good luck!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much for the nice review!