Comment from Glena Jessee-King
This work has some fine features, but the soft lines across the little girl takes away some. They would be fine in the background. The eyes are pretty but somehow are a little out of kilter.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

Thank you

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

I tried to edit my picture but it doesn?t work. Would you have any suggestions

Comment from nikman
A fine entry into the competition presented here! Your eye catching composition grants us an enjoyable view of both sisters. Wonder who took this grand photo? Well done and good luck!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023

Thank you!