The House I Grew Up In
It was a farm house.5 total reviews
Comment from Lynnmarie2
It's a nice start. The overall look is nice but I would work more on shading to bring out the details. I like the trees on the side as well. Keep up the good work, one only gets better with practice!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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It's a nice start. The overall look is nice but I would work more on shading to bring out the details. I like the trees on the side as well. Keep up the good work, one only gets better with practice!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I did the best I could, but I didn't put the door in!
Comment from soulfeeder
I just presume this farm house has abundance childhood memories from your perspective to tell. I like how you have drawn the architectural design and I can imagine this in person. Presentation can still be improve by adding some breathable space on each side. The drawing on the right side is a bit unclear and tight in space. I love your shadings in the roof, windows, and door because they are more defined. Wish you the best in this contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I just presume this farm house has abundance childhood memories from your perspective to tell. I like how you have drawn the architectural design and I can imagine this in person. Presentation can still be improve by adding some breathable space on each side. The drawing on the right side is a bit unclear and tight in space. I love your shadings in the roof, windows, and door because they are more defined. Wish you the best in this contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I don't need to add space on each side, it is better than four stars! The drawing on the right side is trees! I didn't draw a door.
Comment from Maureen Woychyshyn
A very interesting and creative visual presented here of this house. I like your composition and shading. I'm sure you have some very fond memories. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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A very interesting and creative visual presented here of this house. I like your composition and shading. I'm sure you have some very fond memories. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thanks, you are welcome.
Comment from alaskapat
You grew up in a great house , I like the shape of it and the windows.
The house must have been a fun place to be.
I feel that the house is crowded into the space , I'm not an artist but feel you need to be mindful of the size of your subjects so it all fits within the frame, here the chimney and lower left corner are clipped. Keep drawing ! Good luck to you !
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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You grew up in a great house , I like the shape of it and the windows.
The house must have been a fun place to be.
I feel that the house is crowded into the space , I'm not an artist but feel you need to be mindful of the size of your subjects so it all fits within the frame, here the chimney and lower left corner are clipped. Keep drawing ! Good luck to you !
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I thought I did a great job. I am proud of it. I deserve more than four stars.
Comment from nikman
A good looking image posted here into the competition! Your fine, full and appropriate composition offers us a very enjoyable view of your lovely, old house. Well drawn and good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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A good looking image posted here into the competition! Your fine, full and appropriate composition offers us a very enjoyable view of your lovely, old house. Well drawn and good luck!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thanks!