
Shattered dreams
Charcoal on paper7 total reviews
Comment from bpellephoto
Hi Maureen..
Initial Impact: 6. Powerful. Poignant. Relevant.
Creativity of Presentation: 6. An image of this caliber of creativity is the product of a fertile mind.
Color Harmony: 6. B&W is the only way the message you want to convey can be told.
Center of Interest: 6. The depiction of the young woman is raw emotion, loss, despair and hopelessness.
Technical Excellence: 6. A well-practiced and talented hand is very evident.
Technique: 6. Excellent choice in charcoal.
Lighting: 6. The chaotic background treatment sets this piece apart. The background sets the mood and emphasizes her hopless circumstances.
Story Telling Ability: 6. See Initial Impact.
Recommendation(s): None
This one will haunt me for sometime... Bob
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Hi Maureen..
Initial Impact: 6. Powerful. Poignant. Relevant.
Creativity of Presentation: 6. An image of this caliber of creativity is the product of a fertile mind.
Color Harmony: 6. B&W is the only way the message you want to convey can be told.
Center of Interest: 6. The depiction of the young woman is raw emotion, loss, despair and hopelessness.
Technical Excellence: 6. A well-practiced and talented hand is very evident.
Technique: 6. Excellent choice in charcoal.
Lighting: 6. The chaotic background treatment sets this piece apart. The background sets the mood and emphasizes her hopless circumstances.
Story Telling Ability: 6. See Initial Impact.
Recommendation(s): None
This one will haunt me for sometime... Bob
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much Bob for your lovely review and high rating. It’s a topic that most people try to steal away from but unfortunately, in today’s world it’s very relevant. I just want people to open up their eyes.
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
In this beautifully made portrait of a woman in tragic circumstances, you have shown how her inner turmoil harmonizes with her outer beauty in perfect symmetry. Well done! I wish I had a Six to award to this lovely artwork!.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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In this beautifully made portrait of a woman in tragic circumstances, you have shown how her inner turmoil harmonizes with her outer beauty in perfect symmetry. Well done! I wish I had a Six to award to this lovely artwork!.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Ray Gordon
Maureen Very nice rendering of a sitting nude. The subject you have chosen surely is a problem, which is despicable. Exploiting people for money should have a stricter penalty. Yes hold your children close. Ray
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Maureen Very nice rendering of a sitting nude. The subject you have chosen surely is a problem, which is despicable. Exploiting people for money should have a stricter penalty. Yes hold your children close. Ray
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you my friend!!
Comment from Lynnmarie2
This is the sad part of the life these poor kids endure in third world countries and now more and more in the states. Open borders does not help as they are often funneled in as part of a family when in reality children traveling with women who are not their moms are very common. Sad. Very expressive artwork. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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This is the sad part of the life these poor kids endure in third world countries and now more and more in the states. Open borders does not help as they are often funneled in as part of a family when in reality children traveling with women who are not their moms are very common. Sad. Very expressive artwork. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Kathy Banich
I'm sorry Maureen, I saw this image the other day and got pulled away, I'm grateful it's still spooling through, so I have this opportunity to review.
Yes - human trafficking is horrific and I certainly hope we can all work together to end this century practice that degrades and harms far too many in our world.
I applaud you for illustrating (bringing to light) your compassion for on this subject to your art.
As with all of your work - this one too, has resulted with your broad breath of experience, techniques and skill being demonstrated. The detail in the shirt, her form, her expression as she holds her head, all comes together to deliver, not only your mind's eye but your story telling ability through your art. Great Job and worthy of a 10!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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I'm sorry Maureen, I saw this image the other day and got pulled away, I'm grateful it's still spooling through, so I have this opportunity to review.
Yes - human trafficking is horrific and I certainly hope we can all work together to end this century practice that degrades and harms far too many in our world.
I applaud you for illustrating (bringing to light) your compassion for on this subject to your art.
As with all of your work - this one too, has resulted with your broad breath of experience, techniques and skill being demonstrated. The detail in the shirt, her form, her expression as she holds her head, all comes together to deliver, not only your mind's eye but your story telling ability through your art. Great Job and worthy of a 10!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Kathy. I really appreciate your lovely review!!
Comment from nikman
A good looking image posted here together with telling moral thoughts. Your fine and full composition gives us a good view of a very anxious young woman. Details, shades and tones are good. Nicely drawn!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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A good looking image posted here together with telling moral thoughts. Your fine and full composition gives us a good view of a very anxious young woman. Details, shades and tones are good. Nicely drawn!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from suffolkbrian
Exotic artwork Maureen but in a good way,you do excel at this type of art,okay the wording that goes with this is not good and yes exploytation goes on and has done for a long while,not good at all,just got to keep on top of it...Brian
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Exotic artwork Maureen but in a good way,you do excel at this type of art,okay the wording that goes with this is not good and yes exploytation goes on and has done for a long while,not good at all,just got to keep on top of it...Brian
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you Brian!!