Comment from
Photopeb
Initial/Visual impact
4.1/2
Creativity/Presentation
4.1/5
Color harmony
4.1/2
center of interest
5
Lighting/Exposure
4.1/2
Technique
4
Technical Excellence
4
Story telling ability
5
I like your Idea very much.
Also I like your title and it goes well with the image but the image itself kinda fell short in my honest opinion. The lighting appears off and uneven.
The background could use a little cleaning up. This pretty much sums up the rest of the critique/review.
I think you have a really great idea and I would re shoot this and work on your lighting. Try throwing
some more light of it. Maybe from and higher angle to get your heart light more even. Id add some contrast to it as well.
Finally check it real good for distraction like in the background here in the top half of the frame. I would not give up on it! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2025